Wednesday, October 19, 2011

The london times

''Peter wake up it's time for you and Lucy to board the train for London''.we live in Finley [near London] we were going to spend a long period of time with our uncle Phillip. He owns a castle in the far side of London. At this time we are having to go because another world war has started. On the train I was thinking about the cookies uncle Phillip told us we could pick out. Cookies are a special treat that our uncle gives us when we come over. Though our mother dis agrees with the cookies he gives us some anyway.
[ To BE CONTIUED ]

Tuesday, October 11, 2011

The choclate trap (chapter 1)

Julie galloped through the wet rain of the soaking streets of New York.
"Get in quick!" yelled her best friend Karla. Julie trampled into Karla's apartment. Her brown hair soaking wet. She inhaled a deep breath.
"Thanks Karla, I thought I was stuck out there." Julie said breathlessly.
"Well your just lucky I saw you running down the street." She gave Julie a nudge.
"Where are your parents?"
"At work... I think. But that doesn't matter you're soaking wet! Let's go get you some dry clothes." She flipped her blonde locks back and walked down the hall. Julie followed along quietly into Karla's luminescent room. Her bed covers were bright green. The pillows were fluffy and pink. One said 'Kiss me I am from NY'. And the books on her bookshelf had very bright book covers. She rummeged through her closet and pulled out a pair of boot cuts and a yellow t-shirt.
"where do I go change?" Julie asked turning her head up to Karla.
"you can change in my closet if you'd like." she said pointing to her walk in closet. Julie walked in the closet.
"So anyway, Julie,